Eyeless Jenn

Okay, so I have some problems with your OC. Note, I am not bullying or hating, I'm trying to help you.

1. The name "Eyeless Jenn." I'd like to mention that my name is Jennifer, and most people spell it as Jen for short, but it's a matter of preference. That's not my issue, though. It's the title "Eyeless." If you considerably ripped off another Pasta's name, you will be right off the bat considered a Mary-sue when someone views your OC and they don't know anything about your character, because in general, that's how most of them turn out. Like, it's not that hard to come up with your own title. I have CP OC's with titles that are unused yet in the fandom, such as Faceless Sam, Staring Jammal, or Voodoo the Witch Doctor. (Please do not steal.) Uncreative names = people thinking your OC is very bad in other ways, possibly false ways.

2. Your OC looks very boring as a Creepypasta. First off, her appearance to the left. Is that her human form? If so, why does she have a red eye? Not natural, unless she's wearing a colored contact. Moving over to her "Pasta" form. She looks like the love child of Eyeless Jack and Jane The Killer. Pale-white skin, bleeding eye sockets, eyeless/black eyes (I can't tell), brown hair, I mean it all comes together to look like the child of that pairing. Her outfit is very plain as well. Why not some arm straps, tattered clothing, gloves, a mask, boots with double heels, something to add some spice to their outfit unlike a simple open-jacket revealing a white shirt with a black X, black skinny jeans, and white boots. Just plain. And the blood doesn't really help much, if you bring that up to me. Most CP's are covered in blood. Also, you say that she has a scythe as a weapon in the description. It looks more like a knife. If a knife, knives are overly-used and in a result are cliche, but if it was meant to be a scythe, that is not at all cliche, but it needs to be more obvious in your picture of her.

3. Where is her back story? I know that you said you were working on it, but in the description you could put a teaser or a short summary.

4. Is she paired with Jeff? I'm just going to guess by this image. uzumakinaomioc.deviantart.com/… I would like to mention that Jeff would never compliment a girl, ever. Unless it was meant to be a compliment which soon turned out to be an insult. Like, "Hey, you're beautiful." "Oh, tha-" "NOT." (Simple, I know.) You're going against his personality a bit there. Also, Jeff would not have the time to listen to her or spend time with her, even if she were his killing partner, and there would be no love in the killing partner part because he would probably just see her as something that gets in his way.

5. Saying that you will not change your OC's design is very ignorant of you, I must say. As an OC creator, you should have a drive to improve your character in any way possible. Not just make a design and say "This is the best thing to ever hit this fandom." No, you can't do that, that's bad character development right there. Because I see many flaws in this character that could make her better.